Here is my six sentences from my WiP (work in progress)---Demon Mine. This is the hero Samael talking to the heroines (Liliana) sister Eva.
"I will never stop, Sami." She smirked as his lips turned down and his eyes darkened in anger. "Liliana needs to learn that what she did to me was wrong."
"What the hell did she do to you? She left Adam, which made it possible for you to be...to exist."
"No, she made it so, the man who should have been mine, pined away the rest of his days over her!
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Lots of good tension in that snippet, Nikki, I'm already looking forward to more :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Eden. I am trying to bring some heat with this one...:)
ReplyDeleteI really like your second paragraph. The rhythm sounds so authentic. Excellent 6!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing six. Wonder how she's going to make Liliana learn?
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Jess for stopping by! I appreciate the comment.
ReplyDeleteNikki
Thank you Paula..I am really having fun with this WiP. :)
ReplyDeleteLove the tension. Great six!
ReplyDeleteVery nice six, Nikki! :)
ReplyDeleteYou've got my interest, Nikki. Can't wait to read it! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, very very good!
ReplyDeleteGreat tension. Raises lots of questions for me. Great job.
ReplyDeleteLia thanks so much for stopping by and commenting.
ReplyDeleteMelissa thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteCarrie Lynn Barker I sure hope to keep your interest with this story. Thank you for stopping by!
ReplyDeleteBrenda thank you girl! I appreciate you stopping by.
ReplyDeleteThank you Karyn! That's the plan.
ReplyDeleteThat leaves many questions in the air. sounds like a hit girl.
ReplyDeleteCora Blu
Leaves me wondering so many things! Awesome six!!!
ReplyDeleteYikes, that's quite an angry accusation. Wonder how she's going to get out of that one...
ReplyDeleteLove the tension... Great 6!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for stopping by Cora. :) And I am hoping it will be a hit for sure.
ReplyDeleteJennifer thanks so much for stopping by:)
ReplyDeleteHehe Toni Kelly, yeah that was definitely and accusation...:) and knowing Eva...she will find a way or just plain not care.
ReplyDeleteSara Walter thank you! I appreciate you stopping by.
ReplyDeleteNice. Makes me want to know what is going on that she won't stop.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Calisa :) I want that question to definitely be in everyone's mind.
ReplyDeleteNice six! It makes me curious! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Lorraine!
ReplyDeleteNice tension! Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ceri!
ReplyDeleteLove your sample, Nikki! So glad you joined us SSS'ers :c)
ReplyDeleteI definitely want to read more!!!
Tempe
Thanks so much Tempe! You gave me the nudge and I finally did it.
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