Sunday, April 29, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday





Here is my six sentences from my WiP (work in progress)---Demon Mine.  This is the hero Samael talking to the heroines (Liliana) sister Eva.


"I will never stop, Sami."  She smirked as his lips turned down and his eyes darkened in anger. "Liliana needs to learn that what she did to me was wrong."

"What the hell did she do to you?  She left Adam, which made it possible for you to be...to exist."


 "No, she made it so, the man who should have been mine, pined away the rest of his days over her!
 Thanks for stopping by I do hope this snippet has caught your interest in Demon Mine.  You can find the rules for 6  Sentence Sunday here: http://www.sixsunday.com/faqs/

32 comments:

  1. Lots of good tension in that snippet, Nikki, I'm already looking forward to more :-)

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  2. Thank you Eden. I am trying to bring some heat with this one...:)

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  3. I really like your second paragraph. The rhythm sounds so authentic. Excellent 6!

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  4. Intriguing six. Wonder how she's going to make Liliana learn?

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  5. Thanks so much Jess for stopping by! I appreciate the comment.

    Nikki

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  6. Thank you Paula..I am really having fun with this WiP. :)

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  7. Carrie Lynn BarkerApril 29, 2012 at 8:45 AM

    You've got my interest, Nikki. Can't wait to read it! :)

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  8. Great tension. Raises lots of questions for me. Great job.

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  9. Lia thanks so much for stopping by and commenting.

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  10. Carrie Lynn Barker I sure hope to keep your interest with this story. Thank you for stopping by!

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  11. Brenda thank you girl! I appreciate you stopping by.

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  12. That leaves many questions in the air. sounds like a hit girl.

    Cora Blu

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  13. Leaves me wondering so many things! Awesome six!!!

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  14. Yikes, that's quite an angry accusation. Wonder how she's going to get out of that one...

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  15. Thanks so much for stopping by Cora. :) And I am hoping it will be a hit for sure.

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  16. Jennifer thanks so much for stopping by:)

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  17. Hehe Toni Kelly, yeah that was definitely and accusation...:) and knowing Eva...she will find a way or just plain not care.

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  18. Sara Walter thank you! I appreciate you stopping by.

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  19. Nice. Makes me want to know what is going on that she won't stop.

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  20. Thanks for stopping by Calisa :) I want that question to definitely be in everyone's mind.

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  21. Nice six! It makes me curious! :)

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  22. Love your sample, Nikki! So glad you joined us SSS'ers :c)

    I definitely want to read more!!!

    Tempe

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  23. Thanks so much Tempe! You gave me the nudge and I finally did it.

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I so appreciate you taking the time to stop by and comment! Have a fantastic day!~Nikki